帮忙纠正这篇关于"小猫钓鱼"故事的英语作文(初一版)
以下是我自己写的(各方面还很不完善),使其成为完美的作文.
MotherCatandBabyCataregofishing.Suddenlyabirdcoming.Shefeelveryhappy.TheBabyCatisgoingtocatchthebird.Butshecan'tcatchthebird.Becauseshefeelverysad.Shefeelhappyagainbecausethereisabutterflycoming.Andsheisgoingtocatchthebutterfly.Shecan'tcatchthebutterfly.Shedon'thaveafishandshefeelverysad.
以上是我写的,"小猫钓鱼"大家都知道吧,结尾的他没钓到鱼怎么用英语写?
另外帮我指导下我的英语作文!
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